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The not-making-sense-part is supposed to make you want to read the rest of the story, to figure it out... but there is a line where writing can cross from "not making sense" to "stupid" and I think I...

Uhm, if that's supposed to be the back of your bookjacket, don't you think you should spell "fugitive" correctly? :wink:

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Probably!

And I'm 17. Book deals are probably a long...

All valid points. Wow. I've had to answer to most of them before to different people, though how to combine all those answers into one post is going to be an excercise for me because I tend to ramble...

I'd like critique mostly, please :) And I'd like to hear people's insight. What sort of reactions this envokes. I had a shorter version that was more intense apparently, but it lacked vital...

This is introductory chapter/prologue to the novel I'm writing. I'm rather nervous about posting it here, because I really have no clue of what sort of reception it'll get... but I would like to see...