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That's almost perfect! :wink:
P.S. бидет симпати чным -> будет симпатичным (one word)

I can't scan my own handwritten text so I just typed it in one of computer fonts. It's not perfect but you can see here the difference between "л", "г" and "ч".

The words are:
Л уловка ...

Your "л" are incorrect and look like "г" (I hardly can see any difference between "когда", "подруга", "увидела", "Эшли") or even english "r" sometimes. You need to write a little "hooks" on both...