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So far the main problem is with the articles as I see... :(



should of been 'rose' of course, I mixed 'to rise' and 'to rouse'...

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“I hope those...

The story continues
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The face of the old man was now stern and strict, but nonetheless beautiful in its severity. The blast of a wind scattered about his strands of gray hair...

About "dozen". I also thought it should be "a dozen men" but then I supposed as far as it is a noun and not a numeral, then it should be something like "a handful of dust" or "a bunch of keys". May...

Near the far steep end of the dell a dozen of men were fighting with each other. Or rather with one of them. The old man looked at him more intently and saw that it was not a man but a dwarf in the...

To tell the truth, I noticed this kind of phrase "on second thoughts", when I saw "Monty Python and the Holy Grail", and this is, of course, the British film.
The meter in the final poem is iambic...

On second thoughts I decided not to make it a sheer porno trash. I know Gandalf for a long time (since 1976, what a prehistorical time it is!) and respect him too much for this. It should be of...

Thanx for the corrections. It is very hard indeed, to compose something in another language, like jumping across ice-blocks in the turbulent river.
But on the othe hand you better appreciate words...

This is my promised story about Gandalf. I was not sure where I should post it because it is not exactly what is meant for “English” forum, neither it for “In Russian only”, although comments may be...