Thread: Check my pronunciation, please

This is a fragment of a well-known book, and that was me trying to narrate this first paragrah.



Tell me:
If I speak understandeable.
If there's some system mistakes (like I have the R wrong all the way)
If there's any suggestions how to improve it or what to work on mostly.

Ohh, and btw, I wanna sound american.,

Thanks in advance.