Originally Posted by
alusov What are the advantages and disadvantages of having a pet (or: having pets)? Do people spend too much money on pets?
Some people believe that pets influence {on} adults and children only in a positive way. However, other people are sure that pets’ owners (better: owners of pets; genitive 's is normally used only with people, for animals and inanimate objects use 'of') pay too much attention to their favorites and spend a lot of money without real necessity. In this essay I will discuss both points of view and present my opinion in favor of people who are inclined to think that having pets are good idea.
On the one hand, there are a lot of benefits when a family has a pet. First of all, a pet usually becomes a member of a family. For example, as far as my family is concerned, I have a cat and we perceive her like a little daughter in all regards. Secondly, there is no doubt that pets help to bring up children and a lot of positive things usually take place. For instance, children in a family, which has a pet, will be more kind and caring in their adult life and moreover they will get along well with other people. Thirdly, scientists say that in accordance with statistics having cats, dogs or other pets is very useful for a man’s health. So the more people spend time with domestic animals the {more} happier they will be and finally their health will be also better.
On the other hand, there are some negative sides when people have a pet. The most obvious disadvantage of it is the fact that nowadays some people spend much money for up-to-date clothes for their favorites or even get them an expensive haircut. Another important aspect of this is that some pets are dangerous for people’s health. For example, I {have} recently read an article where physicians stated that some types of allergy can be amplified by having pets at home. In addition to these disadvantages adults and children should take into account that they need time in order to care for their favorites. Take for example the fact that dog’s owners have to walk their favorite for not less than one or two hours per day.
You don't walk with dogs in English, you walk your dog. Furthermore, I don't think your usage of 'favorite' is good - you may have a favorite among your pets, but that doesn't mean you don't have to care for the others.
Taking into account everything mentioned above, in my opinion having domestic animals has more positive sides than negative ones. I am sure if a family has a dog or a cat children will be more kind and sensitive than in {the} families without pets.