Thread: Моя Работа (Пожалуйста исправляйте мою грамматику)

Originally Posted by Valda

DONE!!!

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You do add word stresses in subtitles but you do not follow them when you speak
I think you were trying to say everything fast but that reflected your pronunciation
I think you can do better

Originally Posted by Doomer

You do add word stresses in subtitles but you do not follow them when you speak
I think you were trying to say everything fast but that reflected your pronunciation
I think you can do better

Thanks, I think so too ...at the next clip I'll try to pay more attention to word stresses.

Originally Posted by diogen_

Generally, everything sounds mellifluously dulcet… Poor bums, derelicts, junkies, old and young waifs, juvenile delinquents, thugs, outcasts and other antisocial elements... They doesn't seem to know that certain "dangerous and devious creatures" from Greek mythology with "their enchanting music and voices " temporarily relocated to certain resorts of eastern Mediterranean and work there as if safeguarding their bodies and souls.

Particularly, you have some minor "quirks" in your speech; yet I can hardly imagine that at this stage you can "fine-tune" all the linguistic subtleties mentioned above to the point of seemles speech and fluent usage. Just keep on drilling basic rules until you can use them effortlessly and automatically, learn new words on a regular basis, listen to any comprehensible audios in order to gradually and naturally pick up good sounding collocations and have more “intrinsically Russian" thoughts in your head and...undoubly you're doomed to success...,well definitely within the reasonable framework of no more than 300 years as BM and Vitas suggested in the song below.

Vitas - Pinocchio (Буратино) 2002 - YouTube

Thanks for the feedback, very eloquently written.


And AGAIN
Thank you Bob
For the amazing feedback