Excellent! I'll update the text forthwith! Just one misgiving

"Ты не любишь говорить, ха?" It's not coloured text but I'd say here: А ты неразговорчивая. I said to her."
He's supposed to have bad Russian, not necessarily grammatically wrong but very basic. I think a word like "неразговорчивая" is a little outside of his realm yet.

Thank you very much

EDIT: UPDATED THE DOCUMENT