Quote Originally Posted by Rtyom
Russian-translator's is MUCH better. I back up his (her?) translation becuase I'm a translator too and evaluate the work done as very close to what it must be.
Rtyom, can you say why do you think so? I'm not a translator, but for me the rhyme "я пытался - я пытался" sounds weird and i think it is not a correct translation for "i've cried"