translate this tiny narrative anyone?
How would you translate:
I looked at her vacantly when she asked if she could use my phone, and after several awkward seconds of staring, took off screaming out of the room, tripping over her and smashing through the window, promptly dying on the sidewalk next to a crate of frozen sausages.
Re: translate this tiny narrative anyone?
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I looked at her vacantly when she asked if she could use my phone, and after several awkward seconds of staring, took off screaming out of the room, tripping over her and smashing through the window, promptly dying on the sidewalk next to a crate of frozen sausages.
Я посмотрел на неё пустым взглядом когда он спросила можно ли воспользоваться моим телефоном. После нескольких секунд неловкого взгляда, я выбежал с криком из комнаты, пробежав мимо нее и разбив вдребезги окно, и вскоре лежал на тротуаре умирая рядом с ящиком замороженных сосисок.
I think there might be better translations, because the passage is not that simple.
Also, I tried to use this online translator and it gave me an interesting beginning (Я посмотрел на нее бессмысленно...) but the rest needs lots of editing, as usual with automatic translators.
Re: translate this tiny narrative anyone?
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Originally Posted by Trzeci_Wymiar
How would you translate:
I looked at her vacantly when she asked if she could use my phone, and after several awkward seconds of staring, took off screaming out of the room, tripping over her and smashing through the window, promptly dying on the sidewalk next to a crate of frozen sausages.
Когда она спросила, можно ли воспользоваться моим телефоном, я несколько неловких секунд смотрел на неё пустым взглядом, а потом с криком бросился из комнаты, споткнулся об неё и вылетел в окно, скоропостижно скончавшись у ящика замороженных сосисок.
P.S. What is it?!
Re: translate this tiny narrative anyone?
А если ещё - Разбив окно, вылетел из него ?
Re: translate this tiny narrative anyone?
"What is it?" --- есть и слова в "случае" который я писал выше, которые я бы хотел выучить ... лол ... странный рассказ