Thread: My first translation. After corrections

Originally Posted by Katina

what does it mean by : I may be hairsplitting, but I'd say "Your grey name is rain"?
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You translated one of the lines "Your name is grey - rain". I think that "You grey name is rain" is truer to the original, even though the difference isn't very big

omg i thought you meant it was part of the translation! haha