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    Дыши

    Can somebody check for errors?
    Thanks in advance

    Дыши
    Breathe

    Ты говоришь, что страшно я смеюсь
    Есть у меня один секрет
    Ты говоришь, что любишь - я боюсь
    И так уже много тысяч лет

    You say that I laugh a terror
    I have one secret
    You say that you love - I am afraid
    and so already more than 1000 years

    И не держи
    Мне известны все твои уловки
    Я только злюсь
    Дыши
    Ненавижу эти остановки
    Я, я всё равно вернусь
    Вернусь, вернусь

    And don't hold
    I know all your tricks
    I only get angry
    Breath
    I hate these stops
    I, I all the same am returning
    I am returning, returning

    Я говорю об этом, ты молчишь
    И не пытаешься понять
    Я пропадаю где-то, ты не спишь
    Твой аналитик просто blad.

    I speak of this, you are silent
    and you don't try to remember
    I disappear somewhere, you don't sleep
    Your analysis is simply a whore.
    Какая разница, умереть богатым или бедным?

    Какой толк от богатства если ты не счастлив.

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    That looks good to me. Maybe there are some nit-picky things, but overall it's fine.

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    "И так уже много тысяч лет "

    Don't mind me, I am usually wrong about these things but couldn't it be said like this?

    И так уже больше чем тысяч лет.
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    You are probably right DDT.

    И так уже много тысяч лет
    And so already many thousands of years
    Какая разница, умереть богатым или бедным?

    Какой толк от богатства если ты не счастлив.

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    Don't mind me, I am usually wrong about these things but couldn't it be said like this?

    И так уже больше чем тысяч лет.
    Your sentence would be right if you added the ending 'a' to the word 'тысяч'.
    И так уже больше, чем тысяча лет.
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    Quote Originally Posted by ReDSanchous
    Don't mind me, I am usually wrong about these things but couldn't it be said like this?

    И так уже больше чем тысяч лет.
    Your sentence would be right if you added the ending 'a' to the word 'тысяч'.
    И так уже больше, чем тысяча лет.
    It would change the meaning somewhat though, as say 1200 years would be covered by your description, but not by the original one

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    Well, I just tried to correct DDT's sentence. I wasn't involved in this topic right from the beginning, so I didn't know that they meant exactly 1000 years
    "A classic is something that everybody wants to have read and nobody wants to read"
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    Вернусь, вернусь

    I will return, I will return.
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    Quote Originally Posted by TATY
    Вернусь, вернусь

    I will return, I will return.
    Does not "Я буду вернуться" mean "I will return"?
    Какая разница, умереть богатым или бедным?

    Какой толк от богатства если ты не счастлив.

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    "я вернусь" and "я буду возвращаться" mean I will return. You can't have the word "буду" with the perfective form of a verb.

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