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    Poem ..."Play my death queen"

    play with my dream
    play you're my death queen
    i'm the falling tear
    out of the falling dream
    of your sin im here
    in this forest of broken streams
    i cry so silently
    of your joy...play my dream
    play my falling tears
    to death i gave up
    so broken streams
    play you're so sweer
    play my angel dream
    in tears of pain i scream
    melted shape you've wounded my dream...
    angel of me ,play my death is near
    oh my smile ,love me...
    married in this ocean of solitude ...I died so silently
    of my rose
    death in me
    for you i break my life...
    for your touch of love i lose my mind
    oh my tears ...i cry so silently
    i scream my pain to these walls in me
    im crying....the wound went so deep
    play...you're my death queen

    i wrote that...for those who know me....
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    Oh ...My Dying Dream

    noone would ever see my pain
    no one would ever hear my weep...in darkness
    thank god is all i can say ..
    i wish to stay
    she'll do it again ..
    shat i die to be free ?
    feel my pain ..
    my words are spoken ..so silently ..
    desperate dream ...I'm dying
    leave me to death ...Im smiling ..
    my clouds of sadness had came back to be ...
    here, cold ....alone ,winter is another season of rain...
    it reains ....back my tears
    lost .....mentally ..ill ..i become the clown of sadness....
    i whispered my pain to these trees ...
    they said to keep on silent ...
    to lock my fears
    to cry more and dream...
    veilled in sadness ..that is me
    and time will erase all my fears ..
    as the angels of death someday will come near
    take out all my fears.....mou soul
    my dying dream ...its alive
    here i cry ...out of hopes
    to stay somewhere in you
    my death is so near ...my desperate soul will be free
    and my wounds...oh my wounds
    oh my dream ...
    keep me silent
    thoese trees ..stand high ...
    i stand weak ..
    this aire ...cold air touchs my tears....tender
    and the flying birds ...are looking at me
    wondering what fault i have made.....
    looking ate me...and wondering why i weep
    it's cold ...and those all witness my days...
    when im alive ...but so dead inside
    thoese all wintess my dream
    and they know that you..same ..is me
    i cry
    if they just can speak
    they would fill this land of your tears ...
    telling why im here
    telling my wounds
    telling my dream ..sayin im weak
    telling my hopes ..telling my freas...
    oh my dream....
    oh how i became ..so fading away...
    my falling tears ..
    thank god is all i can say ...
    im so done in here.....
    and this life has nothing fore me.....

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    I hate poetry!
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    Poor you.
    «И всё, что сейчас происходит внутре — тоже является частью вселенной».

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    You should put both your poems on a cd and entitle it......... "Just Shoot Me".
    Let me be a free man, free to travel, free to stop, free to work, free to trade where I choose, free to choose my own teachers, free to follow the religion of my fathers, free to talk, think and act for myself. - Chief Joseph, Nez Perce

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    Quote Originally Posted by DDT
    You should put both your poems on a cd and entitle it......... "Just Shoot Me".
    And DDT will make a perfect soundtrack, I'm pretty sure.
    «И всё, что сейчас происходит внутре — тоже является частью вселенной».

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    I thought it was good.
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