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Ramil Originally Posted by
adoc Jeez... I hope I didnt make a mistake... Something feasible next time?
как мы забываем свои детские кошмары.
This is not a correction. You can say it both ways. In fact, if you are no longer a child, your version doesnt make much sense. Change детские to ночные, and then the sentence is alright. There are other stylistic issues as well that I wouldn't comment on.
I just typed the correct version, saved it and then added mistakes. Latest post - just the saved original. Perhaps I went too far in making mistakes
It's kinda hard. To make deliberate mistakes, i mean.
Again, при больных лёгких may not be the most elegant Russian, but it is colloquially acceptable, and the fragment uses colloquialisms, so it is not completely out of place.
Well, I agree, but it's better to say с больными лёгкими, than при больных лёгких.
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Ramil, please, next time, not something this dubious. Did you pull it out of a fiction book? It's a little hard to guess stylistic preferences of fiction writers.
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