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would best be, "Any time he remembered his home world, big trouble was coming."


Are all of them here? I agree with AlexB


I rechecked my dictionary and formally is ok, but for...

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Formerly, this sector of space was a free zone.


Beyond the Silac star system, Terran ships could be attacked by the Silicoids, but their mere presence here wasn’t a hostile act.


So...

chap 11


msp, should be stories


Any man of Terran origin would be amazed at that, but Arthur Curtis had seen more luxurious homes than this.


He climbed down the stairs to the ground...

The Army will have our a$$ on a platter. (is that crude enough?) :roll:


rule of thumb...Don't start a sentence with the word and, either lose it or add a comma to the preceding sentence...

Ships are also called vessels in English, a small group of ships or space vessels is called a squadron, and a large group of ships is called a fleet. This is true for both air and sea groups, and I...

Hi Ramil
In English, if you take a fruit from the tree, you are picking it. We even call the migrant workers who pick the fruit 'fruit pickers'.
If we picked it up off the ground, we would call...

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homeworld is two words, home world


rewrite (Being members of the Tripartite Alliance, they had been granted the right to live on the Human worlds)


rewrite (During thousands of years...

concerning part 9

second sentence, lampshade is one word.
I would rewrite this .... .
The walls were wallpapered with an intricate floral pattern, (or some kind of description of pattern or...