Thread: I translated my resume on English. Please, correct my mistakes

Hello Natasha,
A couple of quick things that stood out. Please run a spell check, for example: Adiministrator database

Should php be listed as PHP? There are other examples like that.

For software list for example, should Active Directory be listed first? Unless listing in alphabetical order shouldn't the software be listed in order of importance?

Scott

Natasha,
Reading the summary, the first few sentences make it sound like you're now a network administrator. I suggest moving the web developer section to the first part of the summary.

Scott

Originally Posted by fortheether

Natasha,
Reading the summary, the first few sentences make it sound like you're now a network administrator. I suggest moving the web developer section to the first part of the summary.

Scott

Scott, you're right. Thank you!

Originally Posted by fortheether

Natasha,
Reading the summary, the first few sentences make it sound like you're now a network administrator. I suggest moving the web developer section to the first part of the summary.

Scott

Hello, Scott.
It will be better?

Summary
Motivated and results-driven professional with more than 10 years of experience in the computer industry. The last four years working on the creation, support, and promotion of web sites and online stores. Web Developer and SEO Specialist with broad experience in all aspects of web site development, design and marketing. I create and integrate web designs into CMS systems of any level of complexity. I’m always on the lookout for new and exciting development and online marketing opportunities that can challenge me to grow with a clear career path for advancement within a company. Possesses strong problem-solving and analytical skills, with high attention to details. Able to work independently and in team environment.

Natasha

Hi Natasha,
Minor detail: Able to work independently and in a team environment. Other then that it is a lot better.

Удача!

Scott

Originally Posted by fortheether

Hi Natasha,
Minor detail: Able to work independently and in a team environment. Other then that it is a lot better.

Удача!

Scott

Scott, thank you that you helped me.

No sweat.

Scott

Originally Posted by Natasha Russia

Scott, thank you that you helped me.

Originally Posted by fortheether

...Удача!
Scott

Правильно: Удачи! Желаю удачи!