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Theme: "The music in my life".

Music has always been part of our lives. Appearing one day, it remains with us forever: at home, at work and even in battle.
I prefer to listen to different kinds of music because it allows to know of different theirs sides. My favorite singer is Oleg Atamanov. In my view, he touches of national problems. All of my friends fond to listen to club music. I can't to get them and they me too.
It does not matter what kind of music do you listen, the main thing that you like it. Perhaps therein lies its role.

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