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Hi! Could you check my text, please? This is [s:3o11zlui]the[/s:3o11zlui] an essay [s:3o11zlui]on[/s:3o11zlui] in the English language (the topic is the imagined interview), and I will be very grateful, if [s:3o11zlui]we[/s:3o11zlui] you correct my mistakes! My English is bad, but I strive to improve it .

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I'd like to work in applied science. My passion [s:3o11zlui]are[/s:3o11zlui] is medicinal plants. I would like to use their medicinal properties for treatment of various diseases, and also in cosmetic purposes. The biology seminar in the Science Center has helped me to learn many things about them. This summer I’m going to the Medicinal Plants School, which will be held at a lake. I think, it will be very useful for my further work. The drug addiction prevention seminar was also helpful, because I was introduced to many ways for safeguards [s:3o11zlui]of[/s:3o11zlui] against drug addiction and vice, and I’m already sharing some knowledge and experience with other people. Having a certificate for successfully complet[s:3o11zlui]ed[/s:3o11zlui]ing training, I worked in the Health Center as a volunteer, in the sector for counseling young people. It was a great experience, because I was able to share my knowledge with other young people and advise them of the need to live healthy.
I am very communicative, like to meet new people and to travel; I am ready [s:3o11zlui]to[/s:3o11zlui] for new experiences and challenges. I am a self-confident and responsible person. I think, that these characteristics are essential for work.
I have experience in team work, because I am a member of the Amateur Theater/an amateur theater. As an actress, I must work with a large number of people, and it is very difficult if you are not communicative and eloquent and if you aren’t able to work in a team. I have my opinion and I can express it, but I am ready to hear others.
I decided to apply for this job, because I think that I could contribute to the development of the company, in the way that I do work conscientiously and responsibly, with a lot of enthusiasm and love. I like to learn new things and to improve myself. I often take the initiative, because I like to fight for good things, and not [s:3o11zlui]to[/s:3o11zlui] be passive or wait for a “good opportunity”. If you want to progress, you must be trying to give [s:3o11zlui]the[/s:3o11zlui] your maximum effort in each field.