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Two friends went to London. They got to a restaurant to dinner in London. There was a jar of mustard on a table. The friends never saw it for their life. (Друзья никогда в жизни ее не видели). One of them put to his mouth spoonful of the mustard. Tears immediately filled in your eyes.
His friend asked him what he is crying about. He responded that it’s crying about death his unhappy father, who it had been hanged twenty years ago.
Soon the second traveler took mustard as well. As soon as he did it tears rolled down his cheeks. The friend asked him what he is crying about and he answered that it’s crying since his friend had not been hanged a lot of years ago together with his poor father.

Originally Posted by Dr.

Проверьте на стилистические и орфографические ошибки!
Всем заранее огромнейшее спасибо!!!
(фром раша то инглишь)

Two friends went to London. They got to a restaurant to dinner in London. There was a jar of mustard on a table. The friends never saw it for their life. (Друзья никогда в жизни ее не видели). One of them put to his mouth spoonful of the mustard. Tears immediately filled in your eyes.
His friend asked him what he is crying about. He responded that it’s crying about death his unhappy father, who it had been hanged twenty years ago.
Soon the second traveler took mustard as well. As soon as he did it tears rolled down his cheeks. The friend asked him what he is crying about and he answered that it’s crying since his friend had not been hanged a lot of years ago together with his poor father.

Two friends went to London.

OK

They got to a restaurant to dinner in London.

They went to dinner at a restaurant there.

There was a jar of mustard on a table.

OK

The friends never saw it for their life.

They had never seen anything like that in their entire lives.

One of them put to his mouth spoonful of the mustard.

One put a spoonful of mustard into his mouth.

Tears immediately filled in your eyes.

Immediately, tears filled his eyes.

His friend asked him what he is crying about.

His friend asked him what he was crying about.

He responded that it’s crying about death his unhappy father, who it had been hanged twenty years ago.

He said he was thinking about the death of his unhappy father, who had been hanged twenty years ago.

Soon the second traveler took mustard as well.

The second friend tried the mustard.

As soon as he did it tears rolled down his cheeks.

Tears rolled down his cheeks as well.

The friend asked him what he is crying about ...

"Why are you crying now?" asked the first friend.

... and he answered that it’s crying since his friend had not been hanged a lot of years ago together with his poor father.

"Because you weren't hanged with him."

Originally Posted by Dr.

Проверьте на стилистические и орфографические ошибки!
Всем заранее огромнейшее спасибо!!!
(фром раша то инглишь)

Two friends went to London. They went to a restaurant to have dinner (in London) - no need to repeat location. There was a jar of mustard on a table. The friends had never seen it in all their lives. (Друзья никогда в жизни ее не видели). One of them brought to his mouth a spoonful of the mustard. Tears immediately filled his eyes.
His friend asked him what he was crying about. He responded that he was crying about the death of his unhappy father, who _ had been hanged twenty years ago.
Soon the second traveler took (do you mean ate?) some mustard as well. As soon as he did it tears rolled down his cheeks. The friend asked him what he was crying about and he answered that he was crying because his friend had not been hanged many years ago together with his poor father.

Огромное спасибо.