Добрый день!
Если у вас есть минутка, не в службу, а в дружбу, пожалуйста, проверьте эти две рекомендации. Укажите на ошибки и, если можете, добавьте полезных фраз, которые я мог бы также использовать. Да и советы по структуре не помешали бы.
Спасибо заранее.
Hello!
If you have spare time, could you please check this two reference letters for me? If it is possible, please also provide me with advice about some useful phrases and letter structure.
Thank you in advance.
To Whom it May Concern:
25, December, 2009
Reference Letter 1
I would like to recommend Sergey Ivanov as a competent specialist in the field of Electronics Engineering. I have known Sergey Ivanov for four years, his performance working as an Electronics Engineer in Some Research Bureau proved that he is an accurate, intelligent, trustworthy and reliable person.
Sergey worked with me on various projects and based on his work I would rank him as a specialist in the field of Electronics Engineering. Sergey is highly intelligent and combines professional knowledge and good communication and people skills. He is
a creative engineer who is able to work independently without supervision and can communicate effectively in
a group. Sergey showed himself as an expert in embedded software design.
If you have any additional questions, please do not hesitate to call me +74955550000.
Sincerely,
/Signature/
Anna Petrovna, Principal Engineer of Information and Telecommunication Department of Some Research Bureau.
To Whom it May Concern:
24, December, 2009
Reference Letter 2
I have been working with Sergey Ivanov since 2005 in Some Research Bureau as his supervisor. I know him closely and recommend him as a competent Electronics Engineer.
In April, 1, 2005 Sergey Ivanov started working in our company part time as he was continuing his study at university. During this time he demonstrated a strong interest in, and knowledge of, Electronics Engineering and proved that he has a capacity to quickly gasp new theories and applications. After graduation in April, 1, 2006 Sergey continued working in the company on a constant basis at full time position as Senior Radio Engineer.
Sergey was involved in several projects during his work at Research Bureau. The most important project was
the development of a management system for
a satellite communication network. His duties in this project were to design, implement, optimize and test monitoring software, electronic device drivers and management software for Linux operating system as part of the management system. He had to design algorithms, accept the structure and the approach of the design, work with microwave communication devices, develop project documentation and provide me with weekly written progress reports. In the final stage he had to conduct the training of the personal who was to administer the system permanently.
Sergey Ivanov is currently holding a paid 20 hours per week position in Some Research Bureau as Senior Electronics Engineer and is engaged in the project of development of transmission and storage data system. He is a leader of the team with two software developers reporting to him. Sergey is well-organized, self-motivated and
a determined person and does an excellent job in his position. He has excellent written and verbal communication skills and can work as an effective leader of a team.
Sergey Ivanov is highly recommended as an Electronics Engineer.
If I can be of any further assistance, please do not hesitate to contact me either by e-mail
helloworld@example.com or by phone +74955550000.
Yours Sincerely,
/Signature/
Ivan Vasilievich, Head of Information and Telecommunication Department of Some Research Bureau.
