The Force is in your mind, the World is on your hands.
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The Force is in your mind, the World is on your hands.
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Originally Posted by Scrabus
Firstly, what is "The Force"? Is it a bad translation, or a reference to Star Wars?
Secondly, if you are holding something, then it is in your hands, not on them. If something is on your hands, then it's something undesirable, like paint or dirt, or blood (figuratively).
We want to use this phrase as slogan. For mage academy.
In first i mean mental force, force of your mind. In this case it correctly or how need to say it correctly?
In second case i think yes, "in" right.
Что-то вроде: Сила в вашем разуме, мир в ваших руках.
Смысл посыла: Вы управляете силой мысли, повелеваете миром и(можно добавить) направляете силу(разума) рукой.
Who would help grammatically correctly to make a slogan?
Thank.
Well, a slogan isn't necessarily going to be exactly like normal speech, so keep that in mind.Quote:
Originally Posted by Scrabus
If this is going to be the motto of your academy, I would use something like, "Power in Your Mind -- The World in Your Hands.
Normally, a grammatically correct sentence requires a verb, but a motto can be an exception.
Thanks for the help :)
You could also try 'the strength is in your mind...'Quote:
Originally Posted by Scrabus
But yes, the way you wrote it does make sence.
That's why i didn't write this variant... :wink:Quote:
Originally Posted by Ezri
About "force" i wasn't sure :P
You could also say;
The Power is in your mind. The World is in your hands.
It's too pompous to my taste, even for a motto.
Too Pompous! Then what about this?Quote:
Originally Posted by Ramil
The dog is on the leash. The doggy bag is in your hand.
Much much better :mrgreen:Quote:
Originally Posted by DDT
That's what we need! 8)Quote:
Originally Posted by Ramil
And the doggy bag is on your stoop, burning. Trick-or-treat!?
Yes, verbs in mottoes make mottoes sound nasty. ;)
I like Matroskin's translation.
And stay away from "the force" in English - otherwise people will think of Star Wars. At least, in the States.