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Originally Posted by olgaa
im doing this for doing in the class so are there any mistakes or awkward sounding phrases?
Here's one. It is considered bad style in English generally to start a sentence with a conjunction. In the first paragraph, you could move "therefore" after "anyone learning English". Also, in the sentences which start with "so", just take the word "so" out completely.
When speaking with friends those things are ok, but for classroom use try to avoid starting with conjunctions.