Дыши

Can somebody check for errors?
Thanks in advance :D

Дыши
Breathe

Ты говоришь, что страшно я смеюсь
Есть у меня один секрет
Ты говоришь, что любишь - я боюсь
И так уже много тысяч лет

You say that I laugh a terror
I have one secret
You say that you love - I am afraid
and so already more than 1000 years

И не держи
Мне известны все твои уловки
Я только злюсь
Дыши
Ненавижу эти остановки
Я, я всё равно вернусь
Вернусь, вернусь

And don't hold
I know all your tricks
I only get angry
Breath
I hate these stops
I, I all the same am returning
I am returning, returning

Я говорю об этом, ты молчишь
И не пытаешься понять
Я пропадаю где-то, ты не спишь
Твой аналитик просто blad.

I speak of this, you are silent
and you don't try to remember
I disappear somewhere, you don't sleep
Your analysis is simply a whore.

That looks good to me. Maybe there are some nit-picky things, but overall it's fine.

"И так уже много тысяч лет "

Don't mind me, I am usually wrong about these things but couldn't it be said like this?

И так уже больше чем тысяч лет.

You are probably right DDT.

И так уже много тысяч лет
And so already many thousands of years

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Don't mind me, I am usually wrong about these things but couldn't it be said like this?

И так уже больше чем тысяч лет.

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Your sentence would be right if you added the ending 'a' to the word 'тысяч'.
И так уже больше, чем тысяча лет.

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Originally Posted by ReDSanchous

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Don't mind me, I am usually wrong about these things but couldn't it be said like this?

И так уже больше чем тысяч лет.

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Your sentence would be right if you added the ending 'a' to the word 'тысяч'.
И так уже больше, чем тысяча лет.

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It would change the meaning somewhat though, as say 1200 years would be covered by your description, but not by the original one :)

Well, I just tried to correct DDT's sentence. I wasn't involved in this topic right from the beginning, so I didn't know that they meant exactly 1000 years :wink:

Вернусь, вернусь

I will return, I will return.

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Originally Posted by TATY

Вернусь, вернусь

I will return, I will return.

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Does not "Я буду вернуться" mean "I will return"?

"я вернусь" and "я буду возвращаться" mean I will return. You can't have the word "буду" with the perfective form of a verb.