Vysоtsky

Is it correct translation?

Я - ЯК истребитель!
Мотор мой звенит!
Небо - моя обитель!

I`m fighter-plane JK!
My motor is ringing!
The sky is my site!

Right :idea:

Except ЯК is Yak...

...because it was constructed by Yakovlev.

...and not Jkolev

I`m figter-plane YaK.
My motors is ringing.
The sky is my site.
But man sitting inside
has thought he`s fighter.

The Unckers was brought down by me
I made all I wish with him.
But man sitting inside
Getting on my nervouses

я могу еще добавить, что слово "обитель" - устаревшее и больше ассоциируется со святыми местами, например с монастырем.