Help me construct my letter?
Below is what I wrote, trying to get my neice to understand my bad russian...actually this is my 2nd letter. I won't show you the first, it was really bad...
If you wall help me, it will additionally teach me many words and phrases...everytime I get help, it really helps me learn.
Anyway, here is what I'm trying to communicate with her, which is that, I want her to record 5 minutes of very simple conversation and then e-mail it to me. I'm just going to release what she sends me as a podcast.
So if you can think of the simplest way you would word such a letter, in addition to correcting my mistakes....you all would rule! thanks
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Ты не понял меня. Мой русский очен плохо и все есть болшьие ошибки.
Я знаю чтобы ты поняла мой английский лучше, но упрямого старик я.
Хорошо. Я начну.
1. Напиши простую историю.
2. говориш медленно - Record. 5 минут
3. отправишь
Я пробовад сделать пример.
Re: Help me construct my letter?
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Below is what I wrote, trying to get my neice to understand my bad russian...actually this is my 2nd letter. I won't show you the first, it was really bad...
If you wall help me, it will additionally teach me many words and phrases...everytime I get help, it really helps me learn.
Anyway, here is what I'm trying to communicate with her, which is that, I want her to record 5 minutes of very simple conversation and then e-mail it to me. I'm just going to release what she sends me as a podcast.
So if you can think of the simplest way you would word such a letter, in addition to correcting my mistakes....you all would rule! thanks
___________________________________
Ты не понял меня. Мой русский очен плохо и все есть болшьие ошибки.
Я знаю чтобы ты поняла мой английский лучше, но упрямого старик я.
Хорошо. Я начну.
1. Напиши простую историю.
2. говориш медленно - Record. 5 минут
3. отправишь
Я пробовад сделать пример.
Ты не поняла меня, мой русский очень плохой и в нем есть много ошибок.
Я знаю, что ты понимаешь мой английский лучше, но упрямый старик я.
Хорошо. Я начну.
1. Напиши простую историю.
2. говори медленно - Record. 5 минут
3. отправь
Я попробую делать пример для тебя.
That is sort of what I would say, although I don't know if you would say мой русский плохой, maybe you need a noun in there...
Re: Help me construct my letter?
I would change the word order here
Я знаю, что мой английский ты бы поняла лучше, но я упрямый старик.
2. сделай 5-минутную запись - говори медленно