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Я боюсь делать первый анализ этих двух недель. Однако вижу, что ты подтверждаешь свои слова некоторыми поступками.
Да, любовь это чистый и понятный язык, не нуждающийся в переводе и объяснениях! Всегда один человек ждет и ищет другого. И когда пути этих двоих людей сходятся (встречаются), тогда и прошлое и будущее теряют всякое значение. Возникает сила, эта сила, которая пробуждает в душе любовь и чувственность и отыскивающая (находящая) душу-близнеца.


Пусть этот вечер будет прекрасным со мной и без меня. И не забывай о том, что я хочу купаться стобой в море и рассказывать тебе свои истории!!! Целую моего единственного мужчину.

Я боюсь делать первый анализ этих двух недель. Однако вижу, что ты подтверждаешь свои слова некоторыми поступками. Да, любовь это чистый и понятный язык, не нуждающийся в переводе и бъяснениях! Всегда один человек ждет и ищет другого. И когда пути этих двоих людей сходятся (встречаются), тогда и прошлое и удущее теряют всякое значение. Возникает сила, эта сила, которая пробуждает в душе любовь и чувственность и отыскивающая (находящая) душу-близнеца.

I am afraid to do the first analysis of these two weeks. However, I see that you confirm your words with some actions.

Yes, love is a clean and understandable language, not indignat in translation and declarations. Always one person waits and seaches for another. And when the paths of these two people meet, then they in the past and in the future lose any meaning. Strenth arises, that strength, which awakens in the soul love and feeling and tracking down your soul-mate.

Let this night be wonderful with me and without me. And don't foget about the fact that I want to bathe with you in the sea and tell you your own history. I am kissing my only man.

I'm a bit bad at translations..maybe there is a better way to word some of that. Maybe some one who is better than me at translating can help...

Here is my try. It may not be perfect but I think it is a little better.

"Нуждающийся" means requiring or needing.
I think ”истории” means “stories” in this context.

"и ... и ..." = "both ... and ..."
"или ... или ..." = "either ... or ..."

I am afraid to do the first analysis of these two weeks. However, I see that you confirm your words with some actions.

Yes, love is a clean and understandable language, not requiring translation and interpretation. Always one person waits and searches for another. And when paths of these two people meet, then both the past and future lose all meaning. There is a force, this force, which awakens love and sensuality in the soul and tracks down your soul-mate.

Let this night be wonderful with me and without me. And don't overlook the fact that I want to bathe with you in the sea and tell you our stories. I am kissing my only man.

That's better!

Like I said...I need severe practice in the translation department...

Originally Posted by kwatts59

and tell you our stories.

and tell you my stories
When a person says "Я [какое-то действие] свои [что-то]", "свои" means "my"

Originally Posted by kwatts59

Yes, love is a clean and understandable language

IMHO the word "clear" would be better in such context, don't you think so?

Originally Posted by kwatts59

I think ”истории” means “stories” in this context.

It is not just the context. "History" cannot be plural in Russian. "Свои истории" is definitely "stories", whatever context there is.

It is a lot of fun to watch anglophones translating Russian into English. I am struggling with the same problem, but from the other side of it.

thank you all, much appreciated. if any of you would be willing to be an interpreter for hire let me know

>купаться стобой в море

Although we say sunbathing, we don't say sea bathing. Here translate купаться as "go swimming" which can include just messing around in the surf.