Thread: Need help with my novel

Я работаю с этикетками. Это правильно?

Марсианин Часа Минут Martian Hours Minutes
Связь Установлена Connection established
Связь Устанавливается Connection is established
Соединение Устанавливается Connection is being established
Международная Марсианская Экспедиция International Martian Expedition
Центр Управления Полетами Mission Control Center
Сеанс Завершен Session Ended
Связь Прервана Connection Interrupted
Отключена Система Охлаждения Энергоблока Power Unit Cooling System Disabled
Экстренный Выпуск Extra Release
Системное Меню System Menu
Ключ Key
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There are other resources for learning Russian. Goodbye.

Марсианские Часы Минуты Martian Hours Minutes (don't know what should it mean=)
Соединение Установлено Connection established
Соединение Установлено Connection is established

Sorry about the confusion. I should have explained.
I am writing a science fiction novel. The two leading protagonists are Russian-Americans.
There are computers and monitors, in the book, and they display labels.
I have learned a lot about forming Russian sentences but, for the book, I also need to know more about forming Russian labels.
Martian, Hours, and Minutes are three of the labels.

I am also trying to learn more about Russian names. I know that Medvedev means "bear" and Dostoyevsky was very selective when he chose the name "Раскольников" since it means "dissenter" or "schism".