4-I like to listen __ music.

As there's no preposition after the verb "listen" in Russian. But in English, there is.

Correct --> I like to listen + to music.
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5-We very want to stay on MR 24/7!

Correct --> We really want to stay on MR 24/7!
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6- I feel myself tired after a long day of work.

As In Russian, there's the reflexive pronoun after the verb "feel". so it's direct translation problem once again.

Correct --> I feel tired after a long day of work.